ext_29741 ([identity profile] carcassi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mojotastic 2007-03-15 07:28 pm (UTC)

Hi! *Waves* Came over via Chiri's pimpage--and I LOVED this!! I especially liked it that your fic shows Chloe as a whole person and doesn't focus just on her relationships or just on her work. Your writing is snappy, clever, and deceptively simple; it says so much with so little, and it really sold the story.

The "flower" theme was a great way to show Chloe's feelings (how sweet it was to see that Clark's little daisy was the one that she kept!). Also, I loved Jimmy showing off his "macaroni art," and the tea party with Lionel. I've never read much Chloe-Lionel fic before, but I can see I've been missing a lot.

Kudos, and thanks for sharing! :)




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